Wednesday, September 24, 2008

next chaptur

Ok, so Charlie landed the spacey ship (kind of) on mars. He puts on his spacey suit, opens the little hatch, and becomes the first man to walk on Mars. Later, he becomes the first man to pogo stick, play hoscotch, and to eat a taco on Mars. Very, bored, he decideds to take the hyper drill out and look for ore and other minerals.He starts to ride it. "Weeeee!!!!!"
But he runs into a huge mound on the rocky surface and becuase of the low gravity, he goes flying a hundred feet into the air. "Whoa!" he said when he eventually landed. He turned the drill around and began to dig at the speed of sound, but not for long. He hit some thing hard and metallic. He started diging all around it,looking, searching, slowly and slowly uncovering more of it. After several hours of digging, he finally uncovered it all. It looked strange, it was something Charlie had never seen before. It looked very old, years and years old. There was paint on it, and strange wheels made of some sort of substance that Charlie could not identify. Then, a shimmer caught his eye. It was the last shiny part of a long bar of shiny metal. There were words ingraved in it. Charlie read them. They said "HUMMER".

Bum... Bum...BUUUMMMMM....The end.

Thursday, September 18, 2008

Next chaptur

Next Chaptur in the story! Yay!So,were we left off, 
Charlie now knows evurything about flying a spacey ship. He is off onto the plane to Mars. Yay! So, here we go. 
"Liftoff in ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two, one..."
"Liftoff! We have liftoff!" WHOOSH! G-force threw Charlie back into his seat.
"AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!" he screamed, then, almost immediately, it stopped and he was floating around the cockpit on the spacey ship. He was now officially in space. "Well, we aren't going very fast, are we?" He asked the computer. "Shift to max speed!!!!!!!!" he said. 
"WARNING!" blared the computer's robotic, toneless voice. "MAY BE HIGHLY DANGEROUS TO SHIFT TO MAX SPEED! PLEASE FASTEN SAFTEY BELT!"
"Ah, quit stalling and just do it already!"
"UNDERSTOOD. PREPARE FOR MAXIMUM SPEED!" the spacey ship shot forward, blasting Charlie into his seat again. Strange patterns appeared around the cockpit window, like plaid, stripes, tie-die, a spinning vortex, and many others until Charlie saw something big and red in the window, and it was getting bigger and bigger. "I wonder what that could be... ooh! Maybe it's Mars! Yay! Mars! Wow, I didn't realize it was so big... wait a second... why is it getting bigger? Uh-oh. AAAAHHHH! Computer, deploy emergency landing gear!!! 
" DEPLOYING EMERGENCY LANDING GEAR!" rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrvvviiipp! "EMERGENCY LANDING GEAR DEPLOYED!" Too late. CRASH!!!! they smashed into the ground. Pffffffffttttttt! went the airbag. Luckily, Charlie and the spacey ship were fine.